Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Issues related to volunteer work to be done by the youth for the

community

are being discussed these days. Growing concerns are becoming heated questions among the people that leisure

time

for today’s generations should be spent by doing charity work for the society. While

this

view is rubbished by some critics who oppose it.

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dissertation accedes with the given statement. Both the views have their

logics

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to support their opinion which will be discussed in

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dissertation before coming to any conclusion. As far as the matter is concerned, I would like to stamp the mark on

this

view by stating that helping society in free

time

by the teenagers has a remarkable impact on the people. The

first

and foremost point that strikes my mind is that

younger

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the younger

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generation

learn

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how to become a responsible

citizen

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citizens

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by adding their efforts into the

community

. Another noteworthy notion

which

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caters

attentions

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is that they become more social which help them in developing mental and social wellbeing.

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can be explained precisely by citing an example of a survey which showed a

comparision

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comparison

between

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a student

the student

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student

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students

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who spent their free

time

volunteering in social work with children who engage themselves

into

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in

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activities like playing video games and gossiping. The results concluded that teenagers who spent their

time

doing something for the locality had

better

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a better

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social and helping attitude whereas the others had

conservative

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a conservative

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attitude. As every matter has two aspects, another matter of

this

aspect deals with its opposite side. Some people are in the favor of not supporting their children

do

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anything during their free for the

community

because they believe it’s a waste of

time

and

instead

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this

time

can be utilized in learning something new as an extracurricular activity. After cogitating on

a great deal of

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a lot of

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thoughts and discussion the conclusion to

drawn

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here is that everything has its own significant value especially regarding the people’s

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viewpoint

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view point

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viewpoint

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of teenagers working for free towards the betterment of the

community

. All we require is to have

optimistic

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an optimistic

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approach and appositive attitude so that we can help in building a better world for the future generation.