You use public transport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport authorities. In your letter include: Why public transport is important to you What problem you face Suggest what can be done to improve public transport

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern about
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condition of public transport service in Balmond area. I have been working in a Public Health organization for around 3 years and, every
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, I must take public
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transport
to go
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downtown where
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work
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as a health consultant. I
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take the bus back in the evening if my work is finished early. There are several issues
which
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are simply unacceptable.
Firstly
, there
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some gifitties on most of the bus's window and
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has been the case for
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of weeks now.
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, sits are always dirty which leads me a question whether a cleaner is even employed there.
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, there is a monitor in the car to show the current locations and
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it's
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always providing the wrong information. In order to improve
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public transport, I would strongly advise a full refreshment of seats and
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windows
in
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as well as fix the technical
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glitch
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minformation
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information
monitor. I will be looking forward
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your response. Yours faithfully, Tom jazz
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