You use public transport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport authorities. In your letter include: Why public transport is important to you What problem you face Suggest what can be done to improve public transport
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern about
Correct your spelling
appealing
appaling
condition of public transport service in Balmond area.
I have been working in a Public Health organization for around 3 years and, every Add an article
the appaling
weekdays
, I must take public Change to a singular noun
weekday
trasport
to go Correct your spelling
transport
the
downtown where Correct article usage
apply
i
Change the capitalization
I
Correct your spelling
work
wark
as a health consultant. I Correct your spelling
work
also
take the bus back in the evening if my work is finished early.
There are several issues which
are simply unacceptable. Correct pronoun usage
that
Firstly
, there is
some gifitties on most of the bus's window and Change the verb form
are
this
has been the case for number
of weeks now. Change the article
a number
the number
secondly
, sits are always dirty which leads me a question whether a cleaner is even employed there. Thirdly
, there is a monitor in the car to show the current locations and its
always providing the wrong information.
In order to improve Correct your spelling
it's
this
public transport, I would strongly advise a full refreshment of seats and windoes
in Correct your spelling
windows
bus
as well as fix the technical Add an article
the bus
a bus
glithc
of a Correct your spelling
glitch
minformation
monitor.
I will be looking forward Correct your spelling
information
for
your response.
Yours faithfully,
Tom jazzChange the preposition
to
Submitted by fmarif2009 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.