Junk food advertising has a harmful effect on society and should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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Over the past few decades, quick convenient
food
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known as
junk
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or fast
food
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has become readily available,
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, these kinds of foods can lead to serious health problems
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as obesity, high blood pressure and heart diseases. Many believe that the advertising of
junk
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food
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should be banned as it is not healthy for society. While I do not support a complete ban, I do.
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, feel that stricter guidelines should be put in place. Companies should have the
right
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to advertise their products and
consumers
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have the final decision to purchase it or not.
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, Magnum Ice Cream is very famous and they usually advertise on TV and on big billboards, especially when a new
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has come available. They have the
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to inform the public, because how else will
consumers
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be aware of their products. If they ban advertisements altogether on
junk
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food
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then
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it will lead to a loss in revenue and even retrenchments. At the end of the
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day the
consumers
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have the
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to know about what products are available. The alternative is to compose stricter laws when it comes to
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food
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advertisements. The public has the
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to know what ingredients are in their
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and especially the sugar content in the product. Companies
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as Coco-Cola already have the sugar quantity on their bottles and cans educating the public of what is in their soft drink. All fast
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outlets should follow their lead when it comes to
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sugar quantity
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, fast
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advertisements should be banned during children's TV shows. McDonald's
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, deliberately advertise their
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during
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time as their main consumer market is children and
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leads to children preferring to eat fast
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rather than healthy
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. In conclusion, even though fast
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is a quick and easy meal, it is not one of the healthiest
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options and it can lead to serious health problems.
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it is the responsibility of the companies to inform
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about the ingredients and stricter rules should be in place. A complete ban is too drastic.
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