Despise the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done to solve this problem?

In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether

although

there are many advances made in agriculture but the

number

of hungry

people

does not decrease. In fact, the main reason that contributes to

this

problem is that spreading the

food

products

is not equal across the world. On top of that, some measures

such

as helping weaker areas on the earth by reacher ones should

be take

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to tackle that problem as soon as possible.

To begin

with, it could be said that despite the improvements in

agriculture

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the agriculture

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industry in the past years, the

number

of hungry

people

does not

changed

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significantly. The main reason for

this

phenomenon is that

food

products

are not spreading across the globe equally.

Furthermore

, it is obvious that as always the developed and wealthy

countries

are able to provide

food

products

with high quality for their society.

On the other hand

, economically weaker nations do not have

this

opportunity to feed their

people

.

For example

, students in a school in the USA have a weekly

food

schedule that includes all the required

nitritions

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for their growth. In comparison, children in some parts of Africa do not have even a simple daily

food

portion.

However

, there are some solutions available to combat that problem like donating agricultural

products

to the

countries

that contain a huge

number

of hungry

people

.

For example

,

the

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wealthy societies can create some charities and collect money to send them to

the

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areas that have high poverty

rate

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.

In addition

, the governments have a responsibility to help these

countries

and send the required amounts of agricultural

products

like rice and barely to them. To sum up, it could be concluded that because some

countries

do

no

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have a good financial statement to improve their agriculture industry, it makes

a

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duty for economically stronger communities to assist them. By doing that, the rate of poverty

as well as the

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, as well as the number of hungry persons,

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number

of hungry persons will deserve gradually.