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In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry? Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Although
 agriculture is being considered as one of the most prioritized industries or services in many states, still
hunger
 is
also
 considered as one of the crucial unsolved concerns all around the globe. In
this
 essay, I will discuss what are the main
reasons
 for
this
 phenomenon and possible solutions for the same. There are a plethora of
reasons
 why still world leaders could not resolve a burning concern like
hunger
. Two of the main
reasons
 are the expensive food products and poor facilities given for cultivators or farmers. When the food items are going through the chain of supply it always ends up as an expensive product due to the monopoly of the market and unnecessary handshakes.
This
 will
finally
 result in two or three times the real price of the product.
On the other hand
, in most cases, farmers have to keep requesting proper infrastructure and facilities to deliver the agricultural products on
time
. Most of the governments of the developing countries had failed to cater for
this
.
Although
 there are the abovementioned critical
reasons
 there are some short and long term solutions to get out of
this
 situation. If the governments can make sure there will be a fair distribution of agricultural products throughout the country
,
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 while breaking the monopolies and unnecessary handshakes
then
 the final consumer price will go down. So, that will be a door opening for more population to consume food which will reduce
hunger
 to a certain extent. At the same
time
 if the farmers can be given the needful facilities on
time
, so they can cultivate and deliver the goods to the supply chain on
time
 without any trouble. In conclusion,
although
 there had been many smart moves made in agriculture, the world had failed to get rid of
hunger
. But if the relevant authorities can actually move to ground level and provide some feasible solution we can sort out
this
 problem to a certain extent in near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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