Inspire of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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It is thought that lots of people still go hungry globally regardless
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good efforts put into
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.
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essay will discuss why
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is happening and suggest some solutions to the menace.
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,
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of the reasons why the world is still going into
hunger
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today despite advances in
agriculture
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is overpopulation.
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, when there is an increased number of consumers which is far above the
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of farm products produced, there is a likelihood of scarcity which leads to
hunger
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.
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, most African countries, especially Nigeria presently suffer from
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a shortage
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of food supply because of its increasing population.
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, in our society today, most individuals neglect
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as a
career
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but prefer a more professional
one
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like medicine. Because of
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, there is a constant reduction in
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agriculture
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workforce which leads to reduced output and
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results
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decreased availability of food
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enough for everyone.
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,
results
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from
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a survey made in a renowned college in Nigeria about
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a future
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career
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careers
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, 80
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of
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students
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wanted to work in offices and hospitals and only 20
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per cent
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choose to go into farming.
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, some measures can be put in place to proffer solutions to the issue of food insufficiency.
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of
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is that governments have to put in efforts to curb the high rise in overpopulation.
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can be done by enlightening its citizens on the negative effects of larger families and
also
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putting in
place
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free birth control schemes. An example of
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is China, where the authorities
advices
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advises
families to have just
one
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child and
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has gone a long way in reducing the country’s number thereby decreasing
hunger
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. Another way out to
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is that schools should deliberately choose
career
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paths for some students in
Agriculture
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. What I mean is that, at the point where pupils are to decide their line of
career
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, there should be a fair balance between courses like
agriculture
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, medicine, engineering, etc. by so doing, there will be a lift in agricultural manpower in the nearest future. To conclude, despite the advances in
agriculture
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, overpopulation and professional shortage are some of the reasons why there is still
hunger
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today and
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, government and educational institutions should act on
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to be able to control the menace.
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