Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

Nowadays, extreme outdoor sports are becoming remarkably popular.
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essay will discuss the apparent reasons why most
people
are engaged in
such
activities
and will
also
provide my personal opinion about the negative points associated
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trend. Many hazardous
activities
such
as hang-gliding and mountain climbing appear to pull in many amateurs every year around the globe. Apparently,
people
feel attracted to
this
sort of
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because it triggers their nervous system, boosting their
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dopamine
generation which is often associated with a feeling of happiness and satisfaction.
For example
, during a hang-gliding flight one is literally pushed into the emptiness of the sky, and while it can be extremely frightening,
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it conveys
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sense of freedom and enthusiasm. On top of that, near-death experiences are scientifically more likely to generate adrenaline than any other everyday situation, causing
people
to respond with a more
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energetic
and satisfactory attitude. As a matter of fact, when climbers
finally
reach the top of the mountain, they get to be paid off for all the risks and the efforts
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during the escalation. For these reasons,
people
might feel prompt to challenge themselves into these risky
activities
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point
of view,
however
,
this
represents a dangerous trend, especially when someone approaches these sports for the very
first
time.
People
should be wary about the protocols and the safety
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needed to
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undertake
such
activities
and should always be accompanied by highly-trained experts not to cause any accidents.
Moreover
,
people
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the unnecessary risks they are running only to pursue
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enjoyment
and excitement
otherwise
they would become reckless and irresponsible. In conclusion, many
people
enjoy undertaking extreme sportive experiences, namely hang-gliding and mountain climbing. Humans often tend to place themselves in
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because it adds spice to their life and fills them with a hormonal cascade of
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irreplaceable
emotions. As far as I am concerned, it is unacceptable to put one's life at stake simply for the sake of temporary feelings of
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joyfulness
and amusement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Adrenaline rush
  • Thrill-seeking
  • Personal growth
  • Accomplishment
  • Resilience
  • Risk management
  • Social recognition
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Endorphins
  • Fatality
  • Risk assessment
  • Cultural phenomenon
  • Recklessness
  • Safety precautions
  • Extreme sports
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