Some people say that the Internet will soon become the preferred method of delivery of the news and information, causing the newspapers and magazines to gradually disappear. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Innovation in technology is already an utterly familiar thing. The advancement in science has affected our lives in many different ways
as a result
of these impacts people opine that in coming times newspapers and magazines will
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their importance as everyone will prefer online sources of information. I completely agree with the notion and supporting arguments will be explained in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are enormous benefits of using electronic media for
news
as
it
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easily available , world
news
and activities are just
few
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clicks away.
Moreover
, most of the newspapers and magazine companies are adopting
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approach and, launch their every edition on
internet
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also
. To
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, every
news
agency has its website on which
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information is provided to its online readers. People find it more
convinient
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convenient
to learn about social activities from their mobile phones and laptops considering the merit of saving their time.
In addition
to
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, social media has made
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hype nowadays. All types of
news
and entertainment
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available on these networking sites.
Also
, many have found a source of income by making accounts on these sites related to different
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such
as some pages provide political
news
while others display celebrity gossip.
Furthermore
,
internet
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provides variety to its users which can not be provided by using traditional methods of communication. Another benefit of using electronic media is that it provides current
news
to its users as it is updated every few minutes because of which users always get the latest
news
without any delay. To conclude, with the increasing incline of readers towards technology and busy schedules people prefer to use
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mode of exchanging
news
which is
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.
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