Some people think that purpose of museums should be to attract and entertain young people. Others believe that the purpose of a museum is to educate, not entertain. Discuss both view and give opinion

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Fuel
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is the most essential resource in our modern society,
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and natural gas fire up power plants and light up billions of homes across the world, petrol and kerosene
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car engines to connect people in an unimaginable
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we could never think of. Yet, some say increasing the
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of
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would help solve global environmental issues,
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inevitably will, but the disruptions to our lives might be a huge drawback that we can never afford. Promotions and government incentives to clean renewable
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is the best
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to replace traditional fuels.
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is crucial to reduce greenhouse gases emission because the
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are still higher than fossil fuels in many places like the oil exporters, Saudi Arabia and Russia. Even Australia,
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wind and solar rich country, has to offer subsidies to homes to set up solar panels on rooftops. As green
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is the best and only alternative to burning the polluting ancient rocks, yet more expensive, the only
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to promote
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through subsidies. So, some might be saying, what if we increase the
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of traditional
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, is not it the same? No. From the glimpse of human history, the Kyoto Protocol, a global agreement of reducing greenhouse gases emission, can never be enforced in different
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because of their own interests. With the same logic, if every global leader sat together, would they agree on increasing the
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collaboratively? The
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countries
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will be furious because of the decrease in export. The under-developed
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will suffer even more because they need fossil
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but they do not have the capital to buy even more expensive raw
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, even likely not having the technology to develop large scale clean
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projects. These
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will never say yes, so it will be impossible to reach a global agreement. To sum up, increasing the
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will never be successful internationally.
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to reduce greenhouse gases emission is through individual government incentives and subsidies to green
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preserve
  • heritage
  • edutainment
  • interactive
  • exhibits
  • innovative
  • multimedia
  • curatorial
  • archival
  • artifacts
  • immersive
  • cultural literacy
  • historical accuracy
  • engagement
  • narratives
  • pedagogy
  • infotainment
  • docent
  • cognitive
  • appreciation
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