Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should find financial support from other sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people call for

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investment in

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, while opponents believe that artists should rely on other sources of funding. I agree with the former since it benefits both countries and individuals. Financial support from the states

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rich

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cultural diversity of the country. Some creative

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, especially folk

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,

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as

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, textile products and accessories, are at the edge of dying out with little popularity it has among

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generation which generates hindrance in finding

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or commercial investors.

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, these

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play an indispensable role in a country’s culture, as they are usually regarded as symbols of a long history, as well as a connection to the sense of identity of some residents. Without funds from

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, the disappearance of these unprotected

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can never be reversed for lack of inheritors and the

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are thereby gradually erased from everyone’s memory, which is a tragedy for the country’s cultural peculiarity.

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not to say that seeking other supplies is not reasonable. The government budget is usually limited, especially in some developing countries with a bad economy and less comprehensive infrastructures, while investing in

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is costly, which means it will use up the money that

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allocated to other fields like public transport, healthcare and state-provided education,

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presenting obstacles to the city development. These public services are more closely related to inhabitants’ living

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and should be prioritized

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since it is

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common sense that primary needs are crucial than spiritual lives. Personally, I reckon that

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should be subsidized by countries when the spending is acceptable, as it

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contribute

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to individuals’ emotional well-being to a great extent. Considering artists’ source of finance, the public can get more free access to art galleries or exhibitions after governments’ support in

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bringing them more opportunities to be exposed to

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. Appreciating works of

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arts

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like paintings, sculptures and murals can be a stress reducer by taking people’s minds off work. Meanwhile, those living in a city where the art industry flourishes are willing to pursue art-related hobbies

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as pottery, which are outlets of negative emotions. These people in an artistic atmosphere thereby have a higher happiness index and healthier spiritual status. In conclusion, it is necessary for

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to distribute more expenditure on

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for the sake of

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country and residents when it is possible.