Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should find financial support from other sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people call for
government’s
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investment in
arts
, while opponents believe that artists should rely on other sources of funding. I agree with the former since it benefits both countries and individuals. Financial support from the states
preserve
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rich
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the rich
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cultural diversity of the country. Some creative
arts
, especially folk
arts
,
such
as
handcrafts
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handicrafts
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, textile products and accessories, are at the edge of dying out with little popularity it has among
younger
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generation which generates hindrance in finding
individual
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or commercial investors.
However
, these
arts
play an indispensable role in a country’s culture, as they are usually regarded as symbols of a long history, as well as a connection to the sense of identity of some residents. Without funds from
government
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, the disappearance of these unprotected
arts
can never be reversed for lack of inheritors and the
arts
are thereby gradually erased from everyone’s memory, which is a tragedy for the country’s cultural peculiarity.
That is
not to say that seeking other supplies is not reasonable. The government budget is usually limited, especially in some developing countries with a bad economy and less comprehensive infrastructures, while investing in
arts
is costly, which means it will use up the money that
otherwise
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allocated to other fields like public transport, healthcare and state-provided education,
thus
presenting obstacles to the city development. These public services are more closely related to inhabitants’ living
standard
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standards
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and should be prioritized
,
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since it is
a
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common sense that primary needs are crucial than spiritual lives. Personally, I reckon that
arts
should be subsidized by countries when the spending is acceptable, as it
also
contribute
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to individuals’ emotional well-being to a great extent. Considering artists’ source of finance, the public can get more free access to art galleries or exhibitions after governments’ support in
arts
,
thus
bringing them more opportunities to be exposed to
arts
. Appreciating works of
arts
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art
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like paintings, sculptures and murals can be a stress reducer by taking people’s minds off work. Meanwhile, those living in a city where the art industry flourishes are willing to pursue art-related hobbies
such
as pottery, which are outlets of negative emotions. These people in an artistic atmosphere thereby have a higher happiness index and healthier spiritual status. In conclusion, it is necessary for
government
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to distribute more expenditure on
arts
for the sake of
whole
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country and residents when it is possible.
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