Some people think that using social media is an important part of modern life. Others think that it is a waste of time. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

For a prescribing veterinarian, Sileo is an α2-adrenergic agonist that doesn’t sedate so much as softly quiets the storm in an anxious dog. The Oro mucosal gel allows rapid absorption through the gum, bypassing the need for injection or tablets, and delivers calm within minutes. In clinical trials, nearly three-quarters of owners observed a good or excellent effect, compared with only a third in the placebo group, a genuine reflection of its reliability during stressful firework events. What makes Sileo distinctive is how it soothes without stripping awareness
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dogs stay responsive, able to walk, eat, or make eye contact, but without the tremors or frantic pacing. Side effects, when they appear, are mild and transient
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a touch of drooling, momentary drowsiness, or a little less alertness than usual. When explaining Sileo to an owner, I’d describe it as a calming aid for specific stressful moments, not an everyday medicine. At the first sign of fear, a distinct rumble or the first fireworks outside, the gel should be applied gently to the inside of the dog’s cheek, where it absorbs quickly. It isn’t swallowed like a pill. If the noise continues, the dose can be repeated every two hours, up to five times during the same night. Owners should expect a quieter, steadier animal, not a sedated one. If their dogs seem unusually unsteady, excessively drowsy, or if the anxiety remains overwhelming, that’s when to call the veterinarian. Because it’s an α2-agonist, it should be handled with care, wear gloves and avoid direct skin contact with the gel.

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structure
Add a clear start and end.
planning
Put ideas in simple order: what the drug is, how it works, how to use it, safety.
language
Use short sentences. Long lines can be hard to read.
cohesion
Use linking words to show how ideas go from one to next.
content
Give more real facts and numbers from tests and explain what they mean.
accuracy
Check facts are right and keep a calm tone about safety.
instructional
The piece gives clear steps on how to use the gel.
evidence
It shows exact numbers from a trial, which makes it strong.
safety
It tells when to call a vet if issues rise.
tone
It keeps a calm and nice tone when telling the owner how to use.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • benefits
  • drawbacks
  • platform
  • connectivity
  • networking
  • communication
  • information sharing
  • impact
  • mindfully
  • awareness
  • diverse perspectives
  • professional
  • marketing
  • entrepreneurial
  • addiction
  • mental health
  • cyberbullying
  • relevant content
  • geographical barriers
  • balance
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