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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. do you agree and disagree?

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Over the past few years, tourism has increased manifold. Some
people
 argue that the individuals will prefer their own country for vacations and dislike the options for going abroad in the future. I certainly agree with the statement and In the following paragraphs, I will put forward my comments to support my view. The reasons for choosing their own country for vacations are apparent.
Firstly
, going abroad will require an ample amount of money. In fact, international flight tickets are quite expensive as compared to domestic flights.
Moreover
,
people
 find accommodations and food exorbitant. So, it is very difficult for everybody to afford
such
 an expense just for having a tour. To exemplify, one of my friends Pooja went to Canada with her family
last
 year and it cost them a lot. After that incident, they decided not to go abroad.
Secondly
, the World was hit badly by
Covid-19
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the Covid-19
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 situation
last
 year and
this
 virus originated from China. Later
on
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 the virus spread worldwide. In order to control cases of covid-19, lockdowns are announced, flights are banned and sanitisation protocols are mandatory for everybody. Considering the scenario, the
people
 started avoiding travelling and chose to explore their own country.
Furthermore
, Tourist visas are banned
for
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in
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 many countries so if somebody wants to go abroad they are not able to go. To sum it up, I believe
people
 should travel to their own nation rather than go abroad. In
this
 way, the
people
 feel safe and protect themselves from viruses like Covid- 19.
Besides
, they can enjoy their vacations with a little amount of money.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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