In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and are the money to improve public transportation?

It is irrefutable that in a modern era the traffic is more increasing day by day. Every

individuals

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vehicles

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. Administrations put heavy

taxes

on private

vehicles

. And by the

taxes

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they

use

funds to make better public transports

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traffic issues. The essay will

dissuss

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discuss

the benefits and drawbacks of

such

a

meaure

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measure

in upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, the

first

and foremost benefit is that heavy

taxes

would discourage

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car owners. It would become very expensive to drive.

In addition

to

this

, these

taxes

are very beneficial As the car owners using less our

vehicles

, reducing the traffic issues and pollution as well as.

furthermore

,

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would be that much more

use

of public transport. It is improved

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this

way. It is often the case that public transport is very poor.

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we often see old buses and trains that individuals don,t

use

. High

taxes

generate

the

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enough money to make the

necessary

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changes

of

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today younger generation. Turning Drawbacks to

such

a solution.

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this

would

heavy

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burden on the car drivers because these

taxes

are very high and fixed rate.

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this

,

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of individuals are coming

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depression due to

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heavily

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taxes

. To

examplify

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exemplify

when the people who

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going to

important

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meeting. They had been waiting bus

2

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-3 hours and they become very late for them. In case of heavy

taxes

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owners don't

use

our

vehicles

. Only rich persons afford

to

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this

whereas poor people

donot

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do not

don't

afford

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taxes

. In conclusion,

this

solution is worth considering to improve the current situations but there are advantages and disadvantages of introducing

such

a policy.