It is irrefutable that in a modern era the traffic is more increasing day by day. Every
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have
ownCorrect pronoun usage
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vehiclesFix the agreement mistake
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. Administrations put heavy
taxes
on private
vehicles
. And by the
they
use
funds to make better public transports
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to
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ofChange preposition
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traffic issues. The essay will
the benefits and drawbacks of
such
a
in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, the
first
and foremost benefit is that heavy
taxes
would discourage
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car owners. It would become very expensive to drive.
In addition
to
this
, these
taxes
are very beneficial As the car owners using less our
vehicles
, reducing the traffic issues and pollution as well as.
furthermore
,
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would be that much more
use
of public transport. It is improved
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this
way. It is often the case that public transport is very poor.
For
we often see old buses and trains that individuals don,t
use
. High
taxes
generate
the Remove the article
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enough money to make the
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of Change preposition
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today younger generation.
Turning Drawbacks to
such
a solution.
Firstly
this
would
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burden on the car drivers because these
taxes
are very high and fixed rate.
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fromChange preposition
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this
,
lotCorrect article usage
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of individuals are coming
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depression due to
thisCorrect determiner usage
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heavilyChange the adverb
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taxes
. To
when the people who
isChange the verb form
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going to
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meeting. They had been waiting bus
2Change preposition
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-3 hours and they become very late for them. In case of heavy
owners don't
use
our
vehicles
. Only rich persons afford
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this
whereas poor people
afford
thisCorrect determiner usage
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taxes
.
In conclusion,
this
solution is worth considering to improve the current situations but there are advantages and disadvantages of introducing
such
a policy.