Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In
people
's
lives
, good and bad
situations
could happen. Some
people
believe that accepting a bad
circustance
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circumstance
circumstances
like
unsatisfactory
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job or shortage of
money
while some opponents argue that trying and improving
such
situations
is better. In
this
essay, both sides of these views will be discussed and I personally believe that trying to improve our
lives
no matter better or worst
situations
is the best
way
. Some
people
suggest that it is
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best to accept a bad situation since they try to comfort themselves to be able to continue their
lives
. To clarify, when
people
are in abnormal circumstances, they will feel sad or disappointed and comfort themselves to move on.
For example
, most
people
who
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unsatisfied
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with their jobs and lack
of
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money
will convince themselves that their jobs or financial
situations
are better than others.
Hence
, it is the best
way
to accept these bad events coming
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people
's
lives
the best to so they can live their
lives
easier in those negative
situations
.
On the other hand
, some opponents argue that it is better to try and improve a bad situation,
such
as a boring job or shortage of
money
because it provides chances to
people
to get better living conditions.
For instance
, even some jobs fail to satisfy
people
's needs, they can find another suitable job. Another example is when someone lacks
of
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money
so searching
more
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way
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ways
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earn
income
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an income
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is the best
way
.
Thus
, finding other ways while experiencing a bad circumstance is the best
way
to improve better
lives
of
people
. In conclusion, some
people
think that accept their bad
situations
is better than try hard to improve them, I realized that
people
need to accept their unwell events
first
,
then
they should find ways to overcome those bad circumstances.
This
method is the best
way
to have better living conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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