School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is starting to take a huge place in our daily lives. Indeed, even

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are now used at school which

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some people who think that children are becoming far too dependent on

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they claim to forbid using

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in the classroom at all

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in order to go back to teaching basic study

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essay, I will provide arguments against

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opinion which is, from my own point of view, excessive.

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,

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at school are only used in order to work. Generally speaking, when children are dependent on

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is because of social networks or

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games, whereas in the classroom,

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activities are obviously forbidden.

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are most of

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more connected than their elders but

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directly due to the increase of the presence of technology in our

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lives.

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, working on a

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might be more useful whether the student

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not understand a word or a tricky detail, he can

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for it on the

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. Indeed, it is sometimes faster to take notes on a laptop than with a pencil. To give another example, if an undergraduate student

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to prepare

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conference, organising a diaporama

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will be largely easier on a specific application than drawing on paper.

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, a

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has a large range of storage which is not the case with paper files.

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, working online should not be the only way of work because having a cut of networks or making any error can

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which is a huge

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of time. Indeed, basic study

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crucial as well because The

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might not be here

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all our lives. But even

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that, for some subjects like mathematics ,

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writing

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paper is essential, teenagers can not do

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required and

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is not enough touch on a

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for mathematic signs. We can

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notice that basic

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might be important but reading or

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writing

on a desk-

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do not affect our

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. To conclude, I believe that children use more pens than

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during their elementary school .

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might be very useful during

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or for the university. I do not think that

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are so

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harmful

for students

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when they are used properly.

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in the future, I think that everyone will use the

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daily.