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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

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These days, the
computer
 is one of the most essential factors associated with humans' live. Some people think using a
computer
 every day have disadvantages rather than advantages to affect their kids. In my opinion, I agree with
this
 statement because it can lead children to be unsociable people, and it is a cause of your health problems.
Firstly
, the reason why I agree is using a
computer
 every day can lead young ages to lack interaction with others. Because some children who addict to a laptop lack collaboration with their family or friends.
For example
, My friend's son who likes to spend his time with a
computer
 game usually goes directly to his room without communicating with his parents because he would like to play a game immediately.
Therefore
, It can show kids who daily
use
 a
computer
 can become unsociable people.
Secondly
, another reason is youths who always
use
 a
computer
 may have some health issues. Some kids have a headache or eye ache when extensive using a
computer
. My young sister,
for instance
, has to
use
 her laptop to do her homework, and she goes on Facebook in her free time. Due to using a
computer
 daily, she got a headache several times at night,
hence
 her mother brought her to a hospital. The doctor told her that it was an effect of using a
computer
 for a long time. In conclusion, in my opinion, I think children who
use
 a
computer
 every day obtain drawbacks more than benefits because they will become to a lack of interaction with others, and they may have some health problems due to using it daily.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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