Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this overweight the disadvantages?

Many research articles have proved the fact that learning a new speech is easier for primary
school
children
as compared to secondary
school
children
. Learning a new
language
at an early age has numerous
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advantages
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as the brain is in its developing stages making it easier to grasp the fundamentals of the proposed subjects.
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my opinion, the advantages of
early
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introduction of a new vernacular outweigh the disadvantages by a large margin. Primary
school
kids find it easier to learn new subjects and courses.
This
is because the neural networks are not completely formed at their age leaving
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huge scope for rapid learning. They pick up the dialect very easily. The information gathered in these years be it words and phrases of the lingo are memorized for a
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. Some scientists have proved that
children
who were taught multiple languages at an early age become bilingual or multilingual as the thought process happens in the
language
in which the conversation is being held. In India,
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of schools teach 2 languages in
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section. The native dialect and English.
Thus
, most
children
in India are
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at least
bilingual in nature. Some
children
become multilingual as their mother
tongue
is different from the regional lingo.
Thus
such
kids will know a minimum of three languages. The disadvantages of
this
system are that the child might find the exercise burdensome, the activity may create pressure on him to study very hard which
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can cause an inferiority complex or dislike for the
language
.
In contrast
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brain is already developed and all the synapses are formed which reduces the concept
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by a
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substantial
amount. The memory is not as sharp as a primary standard student. In these
children
, the thought process will be in their native
tongue
which will be followed by the translation of thoughts in the new
tongue
.
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activity
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has affects
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fluency. As
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proof, I learnt Sanskrit which is very similar to my mother
tongue
when I was in high
school
. I found it very
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difficult
to understand the keys of proper
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sentence
formation which affected my understanding and speaking ability. The only advantage of learning a
language
in higher sections is that of being able to choose the
language
the student wants to learn. If we take into account all of the above arguments, it is clear that learning a new
language
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expanding mind that can accept all kind of information and
then
implement it readily in their thoughts and actions.
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