The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology which can prevent and solve crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
modern era, technology
has become a part of daily life. We use technology
in schools, offices, and homes etc. and now it makes a great impact on criminal activities
. Now numerous cases were not solved in the past because we don't have the high-technology
but now it is easy to solve them. I agree that technology
helps to minimise criminal activities
, however
, it is also
rise cyber crimes
.
To begin
with, In the past, police records show numerous robbery cases but now there are drastic changes we can see that
because of the surveillance system. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, today in every mall, shops, have CCTV CAMERAS, which help to prevent robbery or shoplifter because police can easily find them with the help of CCTV footage and also
if people know they are monitoring, they obey the law and stay away from unlawful activities
. Furthermore
, speed cameras also
help to prevention in traffic crime activities
In contrast
, technology
is really helpful in so many sectors but it is
Change the verb form
also brings
also
bring new crimes
. For example
, Cyber
Correct your spelling
Cybercrimes
crimes
nowadays are very popular. There is a number of cases we hear about related to cybercrimescrimes
. Correct your spelling
cybercrime crimes
Therefore
government makes cyber cells for these types of crimes
. Today so many hijackers hijack bank accounts and transfer all money to their accounts and so many are not arrested since the police can't find any proof of it. Moreover
, so many security systems hacked
by terrorists and it Add a missing verb
are hacked
harm
national security.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
harms
technology
is one of the causes of the cyber-crimecrime
rising, Correct your spelling
crime crime
although
it alsohas
a vital role in the future since it is helpful in crime rates to we can't ignore Correct your spelling
also has
this
fact and modern crime people can handle cybercrime because they are smart.Submitted by shikhasejwal2 on
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