The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology which can prevent and solve crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern era,
technology
has become a part of daily life. We use
technology
in schools, offices, and homes etc. and now it makes a great impact on criminal
activities
. Now numerous cases were not solved in the past because we don't have the high-
technology
but now it is easy to solve them. I agree that
technology
helps to minimise criminal
activities
,
however
, it is
also
rise cyber
crimes
.
To begin
with, In the past, police records show numerous robbery cases but now there are drastic changes we can see
that
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because of the surveillance system.
For instance
, today in every mall, shops, have CCTV CAMERAS, which help to prevent robbery or shoplifter because police can easily find them with the help of CCTV footage and
also
if people know they are monitoring, they obey the law and stay away from unlawful
activities
.
Furthermore
, speed cameras
also
help to prevention in traffic crime
activities
In contrast
,
technology
is really helpful in so many sectors but it
is
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also
bring new
crimes
.
For example
,
Cyber
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crimes
nowadays are very popular. There is a number of cases we hear about related to
cybercrimescrimes
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cybercrime crimes
.
Therefore
government makes cyber cells for these types of
crimes
. Today so many hijackers hijack bank accounts and transfer all money to their accounts and so many are not arrested since the police can't find any proof of it.
Moreover
, so many security systems
hacked
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by terrorists and it
harm
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national security. In conclusion,
technology
is one of the causes of the cyber-
crimecrime
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crime crime
rising,
although
it
alsohas
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also has
a vital role in the future since it is helpful in crime rates to we can't ignore
this
fact and modern crime people can handle cybercrime because they are smart.
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