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Nowadays, most people try to balance work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions to slove the problem?

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Recently, most
people
 are paying more attention to making their
work
 and other parts of their lives balance.
However
, it is a highly channelling goal to achieve. In my opinion, there are two main reasons for
this
 situation: social pressure and stereotypes.
Firstly
, modern
people
 are under too much pressure, especially in the
work
 areas. Compared with those who lived in the past, employees are more considered machines that never stop working and all-around talents who do not complain. If
this
 is not the case, they risk losing their jobs.
That is
 why most
people
work
 thoroughly and strive to obtain qualifications that are relevant or even irrelevant to their
work
, only to be plunged into the fear and panic of losing their jobs at times.
For instance
, law firms without financial practice are looking to recruit
people
 with ACCA qualifications. Stereotypes are another reason why
people
 are unable to achieve a balance between
work
 and life. The most common excuse used by
people
 who cannot balance is lack of time. By way of example, simply not finding the time to go to the gym and
therefore
 not staying fit. In fact, many scientific journals tell folks that it is possible to exercise in between
work
, and it is not always necessary to go to the gym. To improve
this
 situation, it is the responsibility of the government and companies to alleviate the excessive anxiety of employees,
such
 as by not requiring skills that are not relevant to the occupation. The public should reflect on whether their mindset is caught in the consumerist trap of businesses, rather than just complaining about their lack of time. In conclusion, I believe that
this
 current situation can be changed,
although
 there are various objective and subjective reasons.
Instead
, if one does not make an effort to change it, one will only be caught in a vicious circle of
work
-life imbalance.
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