Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world.is this positive or negative trend?
In today's modern world, many countries are preferred to importing the meal than produce. Because it is more effective than producing
products
as the climate of the country is different and they choose to import.
On the other hand
, imported food often travels for days,weeks or even months. And it reduces the freshness and nutritional value, maybe the meal would be treated with chemicals which have an effect on human health. In addition
, the cost of overseas meals is too high for local products
. As a result
, local product production may be damaged. This
will lead to job losses in farming communities. For example
, in Australia, the quality of unemployment has increased by 5% compared to last
year because the country imported more foreign products
and the need for local production decreased.
On the other hand
, importing products
has a lot of positive sites such
as increased variety of foods, and year-round availability. Foods that are seasonal locally such
as fruits and vegetables can be imported from other hot countries and it will be cheaper with low production costs. Leading to more affordable prices for consumers
. Consumers
gain access to a wide variety of products
including exotic fruits, spices and specialty foods that are not locally grown. A bright example of that is
my niece who tastes dragon fruit that is
not produced in our country but we can taste it if we want.she was very surprised when she tasted this
fruit after that we bought this
fruit every week.
In conclusion, importing food has a lot of beneficial sites for consumers
and sellers A wide range of food invites consumers
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