Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Choosing the best way for children's
education
has been controversial among parents, whether to do homeschooling or to go to
school
. In
this
,essay the advantages of each approach will be mentioned including what I am inclined to choose for my
kids
'
education
. There is no doubt that going to
school
would be beneficial in various fields: improving the social skills;
such
as communicating with others, learning to accept other beliefs, be more flexible, and obviously, in the end, the actual learning of different subjects with their teachers. The daily routine of going to
school
, undoubtedly, can help the students to be organized. Not to mention that preparing a daily scheduled plan for
kids
to learn would be
next
to impossible, considering that the parents need to take care of other works as well, plus the unexpected situations will ruin the plan.
Therefore
, it is better for
kids
to go to the specific places, designated for
education
, like schools, with expert teachers, and other
kids
to spend days studying.
For instance
,
kids
who have a hard time finding friends can learn the rule of communicating while they are at
school
.
On the other hand
, there are two major subjects that would be
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care of while homeschooling the
kids
.
First
, kid bullying in schools, which is the main concern of every parent, cannot happen.
Second
, if any of the parents have the opportunity to stay-at-home and
also
could teach his/her own children as well, home-schooling might be a good option because
kids
can learn faster while they have their own private teacher who knows them well.
For example
, during the
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pandemic I teach my own
kids
at home and the result was superbly acceptable. In conclusion, there are advantages to any method of
education
.
Although
I would rather send my
kids
to
school
in order to learn the skill of surviving in a community. Indeed, I prefer to have a look at the process of their
education
while it is necessary.
Consequently
, I would rather use both approaches to get a better result according to what I believe.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized learning
  • cater
  • flexible schedule
  • extracurricular activities
  • safe learning environment
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • socialization
  • diversity awareness
  • structured environment
  • discipline
  • punctuality
  • resources and facilities
  • communication skills
  • teamwork
  • specialized subjects
  • experts
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