You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter apologise for what happened explain why you missed the deadline tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to apologise for the terrible mistake that I made
last
week by missing the due date of a construction project with Abm.Ltd. I am extremely sorry for
this
gigantic problem as I know they were the most significant shareholders of our organisation. I had a clear memory of the project deadline date the following week but I was off from work for a few days
due to
my aileness ,
meanwhile
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its completion date was
preponed
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by the head manager Mr. Choi but I was totally unaware of
this
.
Therefore
, I end up missing
this
assignment. I know the company incurred a huge loss
due to
this
situation. I have been working with
this
institution for the
last
10 years and being a loyal and hardworking personnel, I apologise for what happened and I promise you
this
will not be repeated at any cost. I will be obliged
,
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if you give me another chance to me. Yours sincerely Nabidh.
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task achievement
Ensure a clear understanding of the deadline changes within the company to prevent miscommunication.
tone
Maintain a professional tone by using formal language and phrases appropriate for an apology letter to a manager.
paragraphing
Separate content into clear paragraphs, each with a single idea for better coherence and logical flow.
greeting and closing
Use appropriate salutations and closings in formal letters, and ensure consistency in the tone from beginning to end.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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