In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts- music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

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There has been a developed attitude stating ‘anyone can do
it’
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it
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in various types of
talent
. It
then
led to a result that
people
with no
talents
become wealthy and famous while those who were born with genuine
talents
are not appreciated.
This
essay will present some arguments against
this
view.
To begin
with, everyone is considered talented, whether talented-born or talented-trained. There are many types of
talent
in some areas
such
as music, literature, sports, painting or acting. The view that non-talented
people
become famous and rich is mostly based on the spread of mass media. Take acting as an example, many actresses and actors are famous because of movies they performed and good looking- that newspapers and media hype. I believe that the ability to attract others to their performance is
also
a special
talent
although
they do not have outstanding
talent
at singing, acting and so on.
Moreover
, it seems cruel to justify
that genuine
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that genuine talent
those genuine talents
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talents
are not appreciated and valued because of the belief that ‘ anyone can do
it’
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it
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. Considering the fact that sports athletes and singers are well known for their popularity and wealth
such
as Cristiano Ronaldo, Lionel Messi, Taylor Swift, Ariana Grande and so on are real examples of how genuine
talents
are praised. As a matter of fact,
people
with
talent
surely will be well rewarded one day. To sum up, ‘anyone can do
it’
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it
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is a term created by equal human rights among the
people
. As a consequence,
people
with original
talents
and interests accompanied by maximum development efforts are worthier to be appreciated in lieu of
people
who are popular for being notorious.
Submitted by Minh Châu Nguyễn Thị on

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