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In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts- music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

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There has been a developed attitude stating ‘anyone can do
it’
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 in various types of
talent
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. It
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 led to a result that
people
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 with no
talents
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 become wealthy and famous while those who were born with genuine
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 are not appreciated.
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 essay will present some arguments against
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 with, everyone is considered talented, whether talented-born or talented-trained. There are many types of
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 in some areas
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 as music, literature, sports, painting or acting. The view that non-talented
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 become famous and rich is mostly based on the spread of mass media. Take acting as an example, many actresses and actors are famous because of movies they performed and good looking- that newspapers and media hype. I believe that the ability to attract others to their performance is
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 a special
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 they do not have outstanding
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 at singing, acting and so on.
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, it seems cruel to justify
that genuine
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that genuine talent
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talents
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 are not appreciated and valued because of the belief that ‘ anyone can do
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. Considering the fact that sports athletes and singers are well known for their popularity and wealth
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 as Cristiano Ronaldo, Lionel Messi, Taylor Swift, Ariana Grande and so on are real examples of how genuine
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 are praised. As a matter of fact,
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 with
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 surely will be well rewarded one day. To sum up, ‘anyone can do
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 is a term created by equal human rights among the
people
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. As a consequence,
people
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 with original
talents
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 and interests accompanied by maximum development efforts are worthier to be appreciated in lieu of
people
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 who are popular for being notorious.

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