Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions differ among different sections of society. While few
people
opine that Use synonyms
sports
are just a hobby and others think it holds a significant place in the community. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will be discussing both opinions with the conclusion of my perspective.
On the one hand, folks believe athletics are just like Linking Words
an
activity of passing time. Remove the article
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Nevertheless
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this
can be true for some Linking Words
people
but not for all. Children in their academic years are good at Use synonyms
sports
too and earn state and national level credentials by playing games in their free time or vacation periods. Use synonyms
Thus
, many students choose Linking Words
sports
as their Use synonyms
careers
while earns name and fame. Fix the agreement mistake
career
For instance
, Sania Mirza, a tennis player use to play tennis in her school life and is now a Linking Words
renown
player in the field of tennis. Replace the word
renowned
Infact
, sometimes only a hobby can be Correct your spelling
In fact
life changing
experience and can help Add a hyphen
life-changing
acheive
all the dreams of a person.
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achieve
On the other hand
, Linking Words
sports
do have a vital place in the world as it greatly helps in relieving one's stress. Use synonyms
Moreover
, not all Linking Words
people
are good at academics in their learning years. Every child is blessed with different Use synonyms
talent
and parents must support their children in exploring their skills in whichever field they are good at. Fix the agreement mistake
talents
Infact
, it not only serves as Correct your spelling
In fact
source
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a source
the source
for
Change preposition
of
entertainement
but Correct your spelling
entertainment
also
helps in building physical strength. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
the
athletics Correct article usage
apply
holds
a crucial part across the globe as it can help sportsmen show off their talent and help other Change the verb form
hold
people
as a part of Use synonyms
entertainment
. Add an article
the entertainment
For example
, Linking Words
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Olympics
olympics
held Correct article usage
the olympics
this
year helped to gain large revenue through the talent of Linking Words
Use synonyms
sports persons
.
In conclusion, I completely opine that Correct your spelling
sportspersons
sports
holds Use synonyms
a
important place in Change the article
an
or
society and all the children or adults must always be encouraged in playing. Correct your spelling
our
Furthermore
, Linking Words
government
should provide Add an article
the government
with
facilities or scholarships for the training of students and let them Change preposition
apply
acheive
success in their field of interest.Correct your spelling
achieve
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