Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Being worry about our future is a current feeling in our lives. Some people decide on a career path early and keep to it. For them,

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lead

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to a more satisfying working life.

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essay intends to provide arguments to support my own opinion which is the opposite of

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last

idea.

Firstly

, feeling well-being at

work

is one of the most important

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to have a satisfying working life.

Then

, many choices in our lives can lead to

this

outcome.

For instance

, trying several jobs in order to find our own way is not an issue, because the journey is not linked with any type of success. To provide a clear example, someone who does not know what to do should try many jobs in order to be sure whereas another person who is certain to go somewhere might be

disapointed

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disappointed

and

then

feel stuck. On the other side, being chatty, nice or open-minded might be some useful behaviours to enjoy

time

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during

work

. Indeed, the atmosphere and the contact with others have a huge impact on our daily routines.

For example

, someone

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is always

smilling

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smiling

with a long

carreer

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career

or not will be happy during his

work

time.

Otherwise

, we can

also

notice that doing the same

work

we have always wanted to do block some opportunities which might come when nothing is organised.

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,

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is

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own happiness is the most crucial,

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bur

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there is not only one path to follow. To conclude, following a strict path might have some good

point

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such

as do not feel too

much

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doubts , it might be a less anxious way, but do not know is

also

exciting because of the feeling of freedom and the chance to be open

for

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surprising events every day.