Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
Being worry about our future is a current feeling in our lives. Some people decide on a career path early and keep to it. For them,
this
lead
to a more satisfying working life. Change the verb form
leads
This
essay intends to provide arguments to support my own opinion which is the opposite of this
last
idea.
Firstly
, feeling well-being at work
is one of the most important thing
to have a satisfying working life. Change to a plural noun
things
Then
, many choices in our lives can lead to this
outcome. For instance
, trying several jobs in order to find our own way is not an issue, because the journey is not linked with any type of success. To provide a clear example, someone who does not know what to do should try many jobs in order to be sure whereas another person who is certain to go somewhere might be disapointed
and Correct your spelling
disappointed
then
feel stuck.
On the other side, being chatty, nice or open-minded might be some useful behaviours to enjoy time
during Add an article
the time
work
. Indeed, the atmosphere and the contact with others have a huge impact on our daily routines. For example
, someone which
is always Correct pronoun usage
who
smilling
with a long Correct your spelling
smiling
carreer
or not will be happy during his Correct your spelling
career
work
time. Otherwise
, we can also
notice that doing the same work
we have always wanted to do block some opportunities which might come when nothing is organised. Hence
, finding
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the finding
is
own happiness is the most crucial, Correct your spelling
his
Correct your spelling
but
bur
there is not only one path to follow.
To conclude, following a strict path might have some good Correct your spelling
but
point
Fix the agreement mistake
points
such
as do not feel too much
doubts , it might be a less anxious way, but do not know is Change the quantifier
many
also
exciting because of the feeling of freedom and the chance to be open for
surprising events every day.Change preposition
to
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