Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In
this
modern era
advancements
in
technology
changed how
people
interact with each other. Advanced
technology
brought huge changes in different relationships in a positive way like social, business and in Education.
This
essay agrees that
advancements
in
technology
are positive growth.
Firstly
,
people
all around the world made their life easier by using
technology
in
the
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offices, schools and social life. Nowadays the majority of
people
are working on computers, in emergency times it is very hard for them to
work
in
office
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, but they have an option of
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work from
home
so they can connect to
work
from
home
.
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the
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best changes
technology
brought in education is organizing live class to students, so they can join to the class from anywhere and they can store all their classes to watch it again. Another good thing about
technology
is it connected and strengthened
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relationships
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relation ships
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relationships
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between
people
it doesn't matter how far they are with one button click they can talk with their loved ones.
For instance
, because of
Corona
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pandemic
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many
people
thought that they will lose their jobs, but
technology
and
internet
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the internet
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saved billions of peoples jobs from getting fired.
On the other hand
, the utilization of
technology
got many positive
develpoments
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developments
development
for
people
. In
past
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people
faced many
problem
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with multitasking, but after these
advancements
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their
work
became easier. One of the main development is
people
got
the
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access to watch their account
balance
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without visiting the bank. Another helpful thing is it made our boring routine process enjoyable, whether it is a journey or the daily works in
home
technoloy
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technology
helping us
alot
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a lot
.
For example
, in the olden
days
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women have to spend 10-12 hours
of
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working in making
home
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, but now for every
work
they have machines, it made their
work
easy. In conclusion, technological
advancements
helping humans to make their life better and safe in all aspects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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