Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In
this
modern era advancements
in technology
changed how people
interact with each other. Advanced technology
brought huge changes in different relationships in a positive way like social, business and in Education. This
essay agrees that advancements
in technology
are positive growth.
Firstly
, people
all around the world made their life easier by using technology
in the
offices, schools and social life. Nowadays the majority of Correct article usage
apply
people
are working on computers, in emergency times it is very hard for them to work
in office
, but they have an option of Add an article
an office
the office
workfrom
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work from
home
so they can connect to work
from home
. On
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One
the
best changes Change preposition
of the
technology
brought in education is organizing live class to students, so they can join to the class from anywhere and they can store all their classes to watch it again. Another good thing about technology
is it connected and strengthened Correct your spelling
relationships
relation ships
between Correct your spelling
relationships
people
it doesn't matter how far they are with one button click they can talk with their loved ones. For instance
, because of Corona
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the Corona
pandemic
many Add a comma
,pandemic
people
thought that they will lose their jobs, but technology
and internet
saved billions of peoples jobs from getting fired.
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the internet
On the other hand
, the utilization of technology
got many positive develpoments
for Correct your spelling
developments
development
people
. In past
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the past
people
faced many problem
with multitasking, but after these Change to a plural noun
problems
advancements
their Add a comma
,advancements
work
became easier. One of the main development is people
got the
access to watch their account Correct article usage
apply
balance
without visiting the bank. Another helpful thing is it made our boring routine process enjoyable, whether it is a journey or the daily works in Fix the agreement mistake
balances
home
technoloy
helping us Correct your spelling
technology
alot
. Correct your spelling
a lot
For example
, in the olden days
women have to spend 10-12 hours Add a comma
,days
of
working in making Change preposition
apply
home
, but now for every Add an article
a home
work
they have machines, it made their work
easy.
In conclusion, technological advancements
helping humans to make their life better and safe in all aspects.Submitted by doondi9999 on
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