Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Some people believe that this is an illness and should be treated medically. Others feel that this is only a result of unhealthy habits and it is sport that must help. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

In younger , childhood

obesity

is becoming a new

problem

in most countries. There are some people who believe that

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this

is due to a serious health

problem

, but some treat it as an unhealthy lifestyle. By discussing both points, I will

then

give my opinion.

Firstly

, Nowadays most

children

at a young age are being diagnosed with

obesity

.

Obesity

is a serious illness that can be developed in toddlers very fastly.

obesity

is body fat, it can be a very important point to be noted that,

this

is a serious

problem

in some

children

from their childhood. Because of their genes, and their body type they can be obese. Over one-

third

of people with healthy and others for their bad habits. It should be treated as well as we should be taken care of the exercise and outdoor sports to avoid .

For example

, My nephew has

obesity

since he was five years old, and he is been treated within the time and scheduled with some physical sports like a shuttle.

Secondly

, Mostly In recent times the

children

are being inactive throughout their body and they are eventually being addicted to video games and mobile phones, and

also

they have unhealthy eating habits that are been taught by various resources . The major reason for being obese is because of food habits

such

as fast food, preservative food and lots of candies as refers.

For instance

, My friend is having the issue since the age of ten, and she told us that , it is only due to her in-activeness in sports and

also

because of her harmful eating. And she knows to be better with medical and physical consent. I conclude that

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the

children

should change their behaviour towards eating and

also

playing outdoor. Youngster's should

also

manger their sleep cycle to avoid

this

problem

. Strict rules should be taken into account by parents to avoid

this

unnecessary behaviour.