Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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people
states that sports persons
deserve to get huge Correct your spelling
sportspersons
money
as wages, Others argue that it is not a fair point
and they also
says that people
like Scientist and doctor's should get more. This
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for the country should receive more incentives.
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and foremost, many people
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sports men
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sportsmen
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achieving
money
. This
is because their proponents feel that sports
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this
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the nation
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sports
professionals, that the amount
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money
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doctors
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working
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people
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apply
alloted
to them. I strongly support Correct your spelling
allowed
allotted
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point
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pay.
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an
equal support for both the sport and Remove the article
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other professional
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other professionals
money
for sports persons
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sportspersons
if
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this
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it is important to give more priority to Add a comma
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Hard working
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