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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The trend to stay and work abroad in the recent era is constantly on the rise and it is creating problems by the cause of foreign
language
;
however
, I agree with
this
 statement and incline towards the latter opinion for the reasons. All these will explore in the ensuring essay.
To begin
 with, when the problem goes to the foreign without unknown
this
country
language
then
 it is not possible to communicate with others public.
For example
, a recent study finds that many foreign
people
 did not found jobs because they were not talking with
this
country
’s
language
 like Germany.
As a result
, they do not survive in
this
 territory
,
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 and have no vacancy for those foreign
people
,
moreover
, the
people
 do not stay in
this
country
 cause of many difficulties, which are not enjoyable for a person to stay in a
country
.
Furthermore
, ordering food and buying something is difficult abroad means unknowing
language
 creates problems for buying.
For instance
, many countries are feeling comfortable and give priority to talk in their own
language
, which can create problems to communicate with other countries
people
.
Although
 own
language
 is effective for easy communication, it does not help in another
country
. Despite the argument to the contrary, I very strongly feel a foreign
language
 creates a problem to join a society and buying something in
this
 county. In conclusion, it must be said that territory
language
 has become a complex issue with no easy solution.
Last
 but not least one
language
 like English is the best solution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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