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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The trend to stay and work abroad in the recent era is constantly on the rise and it is creating problems by the cause of foreign
language
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, I agree with
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 statement and incline towards the latter opinion for the reasons. All these will explore in the ensuring essay.
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 with, when the problem goes to the foreign without unknown
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country
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language
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then
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 it is not possible to communicate with others public.
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, a recent study finds that many foreign
people
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 did not found jobs because they were not talking with
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country
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’s
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 like Germany.
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, they do not survive in
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 territory
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 and have no vacancy for those foreign
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,
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, the
people
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 do not stay in
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country
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 cause of many difficulties, which are not enjoyable for a person to stay in a
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.
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, ordering food and buying something is difficult abroad means unknowing
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 creates problems for buying.
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, many countries are feeling comfortable and give priority to talk in their own
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, which can create problems to communicate with other countries
people
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.
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 own
language
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 is effective for easy communication, it does not help in another
country
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. Despite the argument to the contrary, I very strongly feel a foreign
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 creates a problem to join a society and buying something in
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 county. In conclusion, it must be said that territory
language
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 has become a complex issue with no easy solution.
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 but not least one
language
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 like English is the best solution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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