Governments should spend more on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that more funds should be invested

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railways

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of

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, I think governments should spend more money on

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and not on

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because there are limited accidents via

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route of transportation.

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to say that, despite the safety measures placed on

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users, there are still reckless drivers who end up creating accidents on the

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but trains are limited and their movements are well structured which results in a less tendency to crash.

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, only one case of railway accident has been recorded in Ukraine over the past decade but there is at least one

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accident recorded every week.

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, more funds should be put into

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to make them functional and in good

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.

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, I believe authorities should invest more money

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railway transportation than

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because a large

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of passengers and

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can be conveyed at once in a train.

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, vehicles can carry few persons and trucks can carry little tonnes of

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per time but

on the other hand

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, trains can carry heavy tonnes of

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and more passengers at a time.

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, more than twenty trucks used to carry tomatoes from the northern part of Nigeria to the southern part

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but when a railway network was created between these two regions, just one train arrival brings all of the tomatoes.

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should

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be prioritized over

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effectiveness in transporting larger commodities. In conclusion, governments should direct more money to

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rather than

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because they are safer and can convey more people and

goods

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at once.