Governments should spend more on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that more funds should be invested
on
Change preposition
in
railways
instead
of roads
by governments. I strongly agree with this
and will give my reasons in this
essay.
Firstly
, I think governments should spend more money on railways
and not on roads
because there are limited accidents via this
route of transportation. That is
to say that, despite the safety measures placed on road
users, there are still reckless drivers who end up creating accidents on the road
but trains are limited and their movements are well structured which results in a less tendency to crash. For example
, only one case of railway accident has been recorded in Ukraine over the past decade but there is at least one road
accident recorded every week. Therefore
, more funds should be put into railways
to make them functional and in good conditions
.
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condition
Secondly
, I believe authorities should invest more money on
railway transportation than Change preposition
in
road
because a large quantity
of passengers and Change the quantifier
number
goods
can be conveyed at once in a train. That is
, vehicles can carry few persons and trucks can carry little tonnes of goods
per time but on the other hand
, trains can carry heavy tonnes of goods
and more passengers at a time. For instance
, more than twenty trucks used to carry tomatoes from the northern part of Nigeria to the southern part everyday
but when a railway network was created between these two regions, just one train arrival brings all of the tomatoes. Replace the word
every day
Railways
should therefore
be prioritized over roads
because of it's
effectiveness in transporting larger commodities.
In conclusion, governments should direct more money to Replace the word
its
railways
rather than roads
because they are safer and can convey more people and goods
at once.Submitted by idoghojennifer on
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