more and more people are relaying private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars and suggest at least possible solution.
Private cabs as modes of transportation are trending as the vast majority of the
people
are using extensively in daily life to commute to work or personal destination. The problem with over-reliance on Use synonyms
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traffic
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public Use synonyms
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is the maintenance and fuel cost of the vehicle which makes the journey costlier than the public Use synonyms
transport
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the Use synonyms
traffic
congestion has been increased in a few busy streets. In the peak office ,hours an individual spends a minimum of 2 hours in Use synonyms
traffic
if he is living far from the workplace. To illustrate, petrol prices have reached 100 rupees/litre in India whereas an average Use synonyms
car
gives 15 to 17-kilometre mileage which makes the travel more expensive than the state bus or Use synonyms
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more state transportation and build Use synonyms
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this
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more public Use synonyms
transport
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Thus
, the government must increase the Linking Words
transport
facilities to overcome Use synonyms
this
difficulty.
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system has become flexible and available on all possible routes the over usages of personal vehicles can be reduced.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite