Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People

have different views with regard to the roles and responsibilities of

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zoos

. While many argue that wild

animals

would be protected by the

zoopkeepers

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zookeepers

, others disagree with belief that closing the

zoos

is of

neccessity

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necessity

because of the

cruelty

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actions being committed there. In my opinion, I believe that

zoos

are useful in protecting wild

animals

and punishments can be applied to prevent zookeepers from mistreating the

animals

. On the one hand,

zoos

can bring many benefits when it comes to protecting

animals

both in terms of ensuring their survivability and preserve their natural habitats. From the animal perspective,

zoos

can provide the nourishment and living conditions that would be suitable for individual species to thrive.

For example

, many species are in danger of extinction because global climate change had serious effects on their habitat, making them struggle to survive in the wild. Were these

animals

neglected by the

zoos

, they would stand little chance to stay alive on their own.

Additionally

,

zoos

help raise

people

's awareness of how wild creatures are affected when their habitats were damaged because of industrial activities. By taking good care of the

animals

, the zoo would encourage

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visitors to have a sense of responsibility to wild species and their environment.

Therefore

, the benefits that

zoos

provide outweigh all drawbacks.

On the other hand

, the drawbacks that

zoos

bring should not be considered lightly. It is not common to hear reports about zookeepers who treated the

animals

badly or left them starved.

This

resulted in the

animals

feeling

stressful

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and

agreessive

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aggressive

and could make them vulnerable to

diceases

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diseases

disease

or death.

Furthermore

,

zoos

that provide poor living conditions to the

animals

could bring negative emotions to the visitors by leading a bad example of how

animals

should be treated.

This

could lead to

people

mistreating and neglecting their pets or other living creatures that need caring. In conclusion,

zoos

have proven to be

benefical

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beneficial

benefited

in terms of protecting wild

animals

.

However

,

people

should be aware of its negative effects as well.