Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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have different views with regard to the roles and responsibilities of

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. While many argue that wild

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would be protected by the

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zookeepers

, others disagree with belief that closing the

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is of

neccessity

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necessity

because of the

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actions being committed there. In my opinion, I believe that

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are useful in protecting wild

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and punishments can be applied to prevent zookeepers from mistreating the

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. On the one hand,

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can bring many benefits when it comes to protecting

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both in terms of ensuring their survivability and preserve their natural habitats. From the animal perspective,

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can provide the nourishment and living conditions that would be suitable for individual species to thrive.

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, many species are in danger of extinction because global climate change had serious effects on their habitat, making them struggle to survive in the wild. Were these

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neglected by the

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, they would stand little chance to stay alive on their own.

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,

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help raise

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's awareness of how wild creatures are affected when their habitats were damaged because of industrial activities. By taking good care of the

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, the zoo would encourage

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visitors to have a sense of responsibility to wild species and their environment.

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, the benefits that

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provide outweigh all drawbacks.

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, the drawbacks that

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bring should not be considered lightly. It is not common to hear reports about zookeepers who treated the

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badly or left them starved.

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resulted in the

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feeling

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and

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aggressive

and could make them vulnerable to

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diseases

disease

or death.

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,

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that provide poor living conditions to the

animals

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could bring negative emotions to the visitors by leading a bad example of how

animals

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should be treated.

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could lead to

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mistreating and neglecting their pets or other living creatures that need caring. In conclusion,

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have proven to be

benefical

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beneficial

benefited

in terms of protecting wild

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.

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,

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should be aware of its negative effects as well.