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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

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These days, there is a controversial topic that
parents
 are willing to respond to their offspring’s every request regardless of the reasonableness. From my personal perspective,
this
 method of child-rearing would bring a range of problems in
children’
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behaviors
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 and
attitude
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 in their later
life
.
Parents
 may spoil their
children
 in several ways by fulfilling all of their wishes.
First
 and foremost, overindulgence will make the child depend too much on their
parents
 and become disoriented.
This
 means when
children
 are allowed to do everything, they will not be able to distinguish right and wrong
,
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 and become ignorant and thoughtless individuals
as a result
. These overindulged teenagers, usually, cannot appreciate the value of hard work and tend to underestimate their
parents
' efforts.
Secondly
, pampering
children
 may deprive them of the ability to adapt to new living conditions in their adult
life
. In fact, youngsters living in a fully met material
life
 are more likely to be vulnerable to unexpected changes in
life
, which would lead to inevitable consequences in the long run. A number of undesirable results of
this
 tendency affecting detrimentally on a child can be mentioned.
Firstly
, becoming too dependent on
parents
 could weaken
children
's ability of self-reliance.
This
 means a simple challenge may become
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insurmountable adversity, which makes youngsters have no sense of making attempts to overcome these obstacles to make progress.
This
, in the long term, would lead to a range of difficulties, and ultimately, severe failure in their adulthood.
Secondly
, entitling
children
 to too much personal freedom may result in dire consequences like juvenile delinquency. Recent research has shown that many teenagers tend to embark on a path of crime due to lack of parental supervision, which would adversely affect youngsters themselves as well as
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society. In a nutshell, granting
children
 all of their wishes would do serious harm to their personal development, so that
this
 method should be rejected to ensure a wholesome lifestyle for the young generation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgence
  • overindulgence
  • leniency
  • emotional resilience
  • rejection
  • entitlement
  • realistic expectations
  • self-regulated behavior
  • egocentric
  • financial management
  • professional relationships
  • collaboratively
  • criticism
  • appreciation
  • value
  • effort
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