Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

Undoubtedly, there is ample evidence to claim that

crime

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is on the rise around the world. While the origins of

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crucial problem derive from several considerable factors, several remedies are possible to overcome

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challenging

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issue. Perhaps the major factor here is the

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of parental attention to

children

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. If

children

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were taken care of, they would not attend

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. The

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significant factor is the

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of

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educational environment in schools for pupils. Not only do not schools provide a secure and calm environment for

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to learn, but they

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provide some opportunities for students to learn and experience

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.

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, another important factor is the

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of social

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in many countries, especially poor countries. In many cases,

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quick access to

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services

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probably can help young people to avoid

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in society.

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to possible solutions, the

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perfect solution is for parents who are responsible to take care of

children

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.

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need to be supported by their parents. The

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remedy is definitely for government to establish modern education systems completely safe and secure for students and provide accessible social

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to help young people where they are committing a

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. In summary, several significant factors

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as the

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of support from parents, the

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of excellent education environment in schools, and the

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of social care

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are the major reasons which lead

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young people to commit a

crime

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. It seems that a coordinated and unanswerable response by families and government might be an effective treatment to reduce the severity of

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situation

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.