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Write a description of your favourite classmate in 150-180 words

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Since the
first
 day of
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high school
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highschool
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high school
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, I have had a lot of fun with my friends, but there is one who stands out to be my
favorite
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 one. In the
first
 place, we got to know each other through other friends, possibly because we were both not so sociable and talkative. But after that, we found a lot in common and made good friends. He is rather short but
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fit body. His fashion styles are often trendy and look very good on him. His hair is thin and weak so it looks better when it’s curly. He
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 an oval face with light skin but very bad acne on it. He is interested in electronic devices and does a great job at school. He is kind-hearted and everyone says they are comfortable around him. We usually hang out to eat after school and chat on social media when the pandemic was not a problem. He is a caring and understanding guy who knows how to listen and when to talk. It’s great to have someone like you around.
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