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Restricting air travel is the only way to prevent air pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#air #travel #pollution
In recent years,
air
travel
 has become one of the main boosts for the economy
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 many countries. People are travelling for many reasons
such
 as for business, to
further
 higher education ,visiting family and friends each day. I would say it will be hard for us to survive without
air
travel
 nowadays. I tend to partially agree with it as I believe that aviation does have
some
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 certain impact on
air
 pollution.
Firstly
, the increasing business opportunities among counties has widened these days. We are able to
travel
 any part of the world at any time to have meetings for the growth of the business.
Thus
this
 will make some of us stay in different places and it is very convenient for us to return to our home whenever needed.
In
addition
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 many people will lose a source of income if
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action is taken to reduce
air
 travelling.
Secondly
, aviation companies are blooming like mushrooms.
For instance
, the
Air
 Asia company is flying almost everywhere. The company provides
air
 tickets for a much cheaper rate,
This
 creates an opportunity for everyone to
travel
 and visit other parts of the world.
As a result
, the tourism sector is widening in many many places.
However
, the aviation sector can be affecting the population
also
 but I believe that restricting
air
travel
 will not show any big differences but only affect the economy worldwide. In conclusion,
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 I would suggest thinking of any other option to prevent
air
 pollution
besides
 restricting
air
travel
.
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