In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Nowadays in many countries,
people
feel that it is important to own a house rather than living in rented Use synonyms
places
. The two main reasons behind Use synonyms
this
are high rents and bad neighbours. Linking Words
This
essay agrees that it is a positive development because it helps Linking Words
people
to stay safe and secure.
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First
and foremost, the cost of living is increasing in all the Linking Words
places
. In some areas, it is very hard to live in rented houses which cost more than half of a person's monthly income. Use synonyms
This
is the main reason Linking Words
people
feel it is necessary to buy a home for themselves. Another reason is, Use synonyms
people
can't adjust to other Use synonyms
people
who are living beside them. They feel that someday they may threaten them and cause any harm to their lives. Use synonyms
For instance
, reports show that in America many locals are exhausted with the heavy house rents and every one them seeking loans from banks to construct their own home to rid of the rents burden.
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On the other hand
, many Linking Words
people
say that it is a positive development because they will feel more safe and secure while living in their own homes. Use synonyms
People
who are living in urban Use synonyms
places
feel insecure with the others who are living Use synonyms
next
to them. So they decide to live in their own place, where they can move freely without worrying about others. Linking Words
For example
, because of the security concern in many Linking Words
places
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people
are choosing to have owned houses they feel that it is the best idea to live separately. Use synonyms
Thus
, it proves that living in owned place is safer than rentals.
In conclusion, Linking Words
people
all around the world are interested in giving priority to have own homes despite rented flats. In my view is it best to have own place for everyone where they can do all kind of activities without thinking about security problems.Use synonyms
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