In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Nowadays in many countries,
people
feel that it is important to own a house rather than living in rented places
. The two main reasons behind this
are high rents and bad neighbours. This
essay agrees that it is a positive development because it helps people
to stay safe and secure.
First
and foremost, the cost of living is increasing in all the places
. In some areas, it is very hard to live in rented houses which cost more than half of a person's monthly income. This
is the main reason people
feel it is necessary to buy a home for themselves. Another reason is, people
can't adjust to other people
who are living beside them. They feel that someday they may threaten them and cause any harm to their lives. For instance
, reports show that in America many locals are exhausted with the heavy house rents and every one them seeking loans from banks to construct their own home to rid of the rents burden.
On the other hand
, many people
say that it is a positive development because they will feel more safe and secure while living in their own homes. People
who are living in urban places
feel insecure with the others who are living next
to them. So they decide to live in their own place, where they can move freely without worrying about others. For example
, because of the security concern in many places
people
are choosing to have owned houses they feel that it is the best idea to live separately. Thus
, it proves that living in owned place is safer than rentals.
In conclusion, people
all around the world are interested in giving priority to have own homes despite rented flats. In my view is it best to have own place for everyone where they can do all kind of activities without thinking about security problems.Submitted by doondi9999 on
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