In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

Many Countries health managers required the government to raise the tax on junk

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in order to control the public’s unhealthy eating habits.

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method and illustrates that would not be affordable due to some points.

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, homeless people would starve more than past and

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would not affect those who consume every day outside of their house. Rising up the tariff for fast prepared

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have side effects on

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and persons who have lower incomes. In most

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countries, raw materials are highly valued which poor people prefer to consume junk and pre-cooked

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rather than buying

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organic ones and cook them at home.

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, health issues would be purposeless toward their style of eating. Based on a survey in 2020 in Italy’s

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stores, 40% of the

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customers

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were homeless ones

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eat at least one meal per

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there. As can be imagined, increasing tasks will make poor ones stay hungry and that may cause social disorders like indigestive illnesses. In crowded and big cities everyone has a busy schedule

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they stay outside of their home for more than eight hours

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they do not have enough time to cook meals at home and stay in the kitchen for a long time. Increasing taxes would not have any good impacts on employees since they will pay for their feeding consumption no matter how expensive it could be. In Tokyo, 90% of people eat in restaurants since time is precious for them and it is highly essential to spend it wisely. To sum it up, levy tariffs on junk

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and get duty from restaurants would not have any positive effect. In conclusion, the consuming system of a society is really important to feed each person of it equally without raising up the fee. It is mandatory, Both groups of fewer incomers and workers feed themselves with pre-cooked meals anytime they want. I strongly disagree to pay higher taxes for fast food