These days many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical,or other aid. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this for countries that give and receive?

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Each country in the world has the different management that
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to the
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of that country . Some
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have a lot of
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to
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the
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have a few
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. Many factors of those
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economy and education,are consistent
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how much
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deserve the
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. As well,
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serving high
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still have
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benefits and drawbacks. The more you give,the more you get. Some of you have may
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before.
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giving of
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gets the advantages from a number of
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food and medical
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countries
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get the basic factors to live and
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driven workers
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. The
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is able to live easier. They are happy. Working is passed through with happiness.
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the other
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, giving high
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requires
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cost. Even the
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is happy and has the good moral to
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, the
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bankrupt from high
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deserving the
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, some
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get only advantages, they don’t do
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at all because of high
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Economy
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cannot be driven unless
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work
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both
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benefits and drawbacks are managed as
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from
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the government. Giving high
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should have
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the policies that controlling the
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as
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good
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the
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gets depend on how much
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work
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. The policies of each side, giving and receiving make
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of the
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is not only
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to be happy, but the
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and governments are
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