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New houses are often designed to have open private spaces like a balcony or garden. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this approach?

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Now a days
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, most of the buildings are being constructed with a huge backyard. While there are a couple of disadvantages, I believe that having a lot of empty space as a balcony or garden
have
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 more advantages. In
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Passage
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 I'm going to list out the merits as well as demerits.
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 we will see why I reckon advantage's overcome
disadvantage's
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To begin
 with the advantages of having a large lawn.
Firstly
, we can utilize
this
 gigantic space for our physical activities which include a vast place for children outdoor games and
also
 we can utilize
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 our daily workouts.
For instance
, I knew a family named miller they had a vast patio where and which their children used to play a lot many games.
Moreover
, the elders used to do their yoga and all kind of exercises.
Secondly
, having
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mega grounds can help us to organise our parties at home.
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, For birthdays
instead
 of going out and spending a lot of
money
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 we can enjoy
at
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ourselves at
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 our own home. Which will be fabulous though. Coming to the
disadvantage's
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. The only demerit
comes
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 to my mind is that we need to keep our veranda clean;
however
, we can change that to advantage as well. To elaborate, we can do
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workout
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 by cleaning our courtyard
as a result
 we can boost up
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out
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 metabolism and we can stay fit. To conclude, from the above details we can see that there are more advantages than disadvantages.
Infact
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In fact
, we can
trun
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turn
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 to
merit's
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merits
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. So, I
Personally
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personally
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 think having a big patio would be more
beneficious
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beneficial
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