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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is increasing the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Hi Emma, I hope you’re doing well in
korea
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! I’m just writing to ask you to come to visit my country, Thailand. There’ll be a
Thai
 food
event
 in Bangkok
in
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 25th-31st December 2021. I hope you’re interested in joining and travelling here. I think it is a good opportunity for you if you can come
along
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this
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event
. As I remembered, you told me that you really like eating
the
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traditional
Thai
 food which
called
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 ‘Pad-
Thai
. Are you free to celebrate the new year in Thailand
this
 year? If yes, let’s book the flight! About
this
Thai
 food
event
, there’s not any charge
of
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for
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the
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entry. Everyone can play any games whatever they want. The advertisement shows that there’ll have almost 100 popular
Thai
 restaurants and famous celebrities
in
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this
 big
event
 too. Once you arrive in Thailand, I will bring you to
this
event
. Not only here, but
also
other
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in other
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 places. You can imagine your
trips
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 with me. Having said that, my plan is
taking
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 you to the beach, floating market,
Thai
 temple, and many more.
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 see you soon at the end of the year. Best wishes, Mookie
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