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Hi Emma, I hope you’re doing well in
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! I’m just writing to ask you to come to visit my country, Thailand. There’ll be a
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in Bangkok
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25th-31st December 2021. I hope you’re interested in joining and travelling here. I think it is a good opportunity for you if you can come
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. Are you free to celebrate the new year in Thailand
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see you soon at the end of the year. Best wishes, Mookie
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disproportionately affect
  • renewable sources
  • solar energy
  • equity in environmental policies
  • exacerbating social inequalities
  • incentivizing
  • subsidies
  • strict regulations
  • industrial emissions
  • sustainable local production
  • carbon footprints
  • punitive measures
  • sustainability efforts
  • robust and lasting changes
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