Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, almost every city has a zoo, people go there looking for entertainment and to learn about the wildlife.
Although
a segment of society is concerned that Linking Words
zoos
help to preserve Use synonyms
animals
, others, Use synonyms
however
, believe that they should be shut down because Linking Words
animals
should not be caged. Both points of view need to be addressed before formulating an opinion.
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first
and foremost, they protect endangered Linking Words
animals
from illegal activities like poaching and hunting. The number of wildlife is dramatically declining, Use synonyms
this
is happening in response to human habitation, deforestation, pollution and many other reasons. Linking Words
Hence
, Linking Words
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help Use synonyms
animals
to avoid the grievous consequences of human beings' activities. Use synonyms
Secondly
, people get a chance to educate themselves and their children about wildlife. Linking Words
For example
, children learn about Linking Words
animals
and respect their lives.
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On the contrary
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zoos
curtail freedom. More specifically, predators are meant to hunt to survive, others should run miles to stay healthy which is impossible in Use synonyms
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Subsequently
, it detrimentally affects the physical and mental wellbeing of Linking Words
animals
. It can be seen in their behaviour, Use synonyms
for instance
, some Linking Words
animals
go back and forth in their cages not knowing what to do. Use synonyms
Moreover
, not all Linking Words
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zoos
belong to the endangered category. They are kept in cages only to entertain humans and bring financial profit to business owners, which is immoral.
To conclude, I personally opine that wild creatures are not meant to be kept in cages. Use synonyms
Instead
, they should be preserved in protected national park areas where they have more freedom.Linking Words
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