Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals are free to do whatever they wanted to do. It could not function well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discipline is an inevitable part of society, which help people to work together in a systematic way. Would you reckon that without
rules
and regulations, commoners can to
live hassle-free life? I believe that these should be followed with some liberty.
To embark , on healthy interpersonal relationships, everyone has to play their duty properly. As it helps to inculcate the religious and cultural values among the people. Fix the infinitive
apply
For instance
, children should focus on studies, but, out of their free ,will some of them will be get distracted and indulge themselves in drug addiction or gambling etc. Therefore
, it will deteriorate their relationships with family and friends, as well as, they will become dangerous for society.
In addition
to this
, mother nature is in a discipline, as we are having day after night, winter after summer also
. The masters of wisdom said that due to social and moral ethics, everything works in sequential order. For instance
, from the individual to a person at the top designation is abided by the law. Despite all benefits, sometimes these become shackles for the person. Consequently
, the individual wants to get out of this
cage of rules
and follow unethical paths. The rules
are meant for the betterment and the safety of people and the whole community rather than to restrict anyone's freedom.
To conclude, laws and rules
should be followed by every individual willing, not be enforcing them. Everyone should have a sense of duty as this
is the need of the hour.Submitted by kirann.k1991 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite