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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.  In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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These days, the development of
technology
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, namely smartphones and the internet, has absolutely changed the way
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people
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 interacting with each other compared to the past. In
this
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technology
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 influences the process of making
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the relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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 among
people
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, and indicate some of
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the positive
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 aspects of
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 of
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. Rolling out the internet and
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social media make
people
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 easier meet new friends, and know more about
others
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. In the past,
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relationships were created only by face to face interaction, which they need to spend more time
to talk
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 and do activities together for making friendship. Comparably, recent
people
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 know the personality, lifestyle, and
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characteristics
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 of
others
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 via the profiles, and the posts
in
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 Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter, regardless of meeting each other before.
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, If you want to know the attributes and the perspectives of your targeted girl, you are able to know hers by checking their social media.
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,
technology
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 is invaluable to scan basically profiles and
attritudes
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attitudes
, and you can decide later to make
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a friend
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friend
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friends
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 or not. The development of
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 provides
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positive aspects for human's communication. Nowadays,
people
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 can contact
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others
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 everywhere and every time via the communicated applications including Line, Whatapp, Facebook's messenger, and so on.
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, parents in Asia can contact
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their sons living in Europe via video calls in
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 application.
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 a few
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 on their phone, they can see each other
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faces
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 and the ongoing situation through the phone's camera. As these aforementioned, the positive side of
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 development outnumbers its negative side. In conclusion, the enhancement of
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 has considerably converted the way of interaction and forming the relationship. As enabling
people
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 to know more about each
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others
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 and facilitating
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communication.
Technology
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 has more
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beneficial
 effects than
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harmful implications.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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