In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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In the era of

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technology, all the cars, buses and trucks will be automated in the future and only the passengers will be travelling inside these

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. While some agree

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is good, some think it might be bad. Though there are arguments, I radically believe that the positive side is always stronger than the other ones.

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essay will discuss both of them and explain the reasons.

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with, there are definitely

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of advantages

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these automated

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, they will be convenient to use. Driving skills will not be required to be learned as the

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are driverless which means they will be using GPS,

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, etc.

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, if a person needs to be at

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and he doesn't know how to drive,

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the

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automation

will be handy.

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economy will be boosted.

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, companies manufacturing these

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will be needing more and more

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employees for the car's

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will reduce

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unemployment

to some extent.

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but not the least, productivity will increase.

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instead

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of driving the person in the car can think of any other activities or can prepare for something like presentations for his company or even relax and stay away from the stress

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, few disadvantages make it hard for some people. There are chances of system failure due to

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. If the

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doesn't

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work, there will be

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casualties

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, Hackers always find new ways to hack into the systems .

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, the repair work will costly when

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compared

to the older generation cars. But all these things can be mitigated or even

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eradicated

as new technologies come into pictures like AI which learns things on its own, corrects on its own, new and strong firewalls. In conclusion,

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essay has discussed both pros and cons.

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there are some demerits, the advantages overweigh the drawbacks highlighting the benefits. People are attracting to

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process in order to lead an easy life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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