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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

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In the present day. There are plenty of
people
 in the society and require consumption contribute to creating
waste
 products which are release from household become the serious
problem
 in numerous nation.
However
, many
citizens
 are affected by the over
rubbish
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the rubbish
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problem
. In
this
 essay, I will find the possible solutions to solve
this
problem
Firstly
. Many
citizens
 are not gain about knowledge to manage the rubbish from the accommodation and some family have a lot of garbage as more responsibility to deal with themself.
As a result
, any problems are widely spread in the community and are beginning of the pollution.
Furthermore
, Adolescents have a risk
order
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 to receive lethal diseases
such
 as respiratory disease which is constructed by burning garbage.
For instance
, In India, The rate of
waste
 products is the largest amount in Asia.
As a result
, More than half of
people
 are facing a lack of pure water. which is the issue of dirty contamination. effective methods are solved
this
 issue must educate the
citizens
 to utilize in exact
behaviors
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.
Firstly
 The government should encourage to separate the
waste
 product and arrange useful activities for learning the effect of the negative sides of the problems.
Moreover
,
Although
people
 are already gain awareness. The government should enact strict rules contribute to manufacturing
people
 not dare to make mistakes In conclusion, I strongly believe that the effect of rubbish are the various problems in the recent day and the major the issue is
citizens
 lack information about the proper
waste
 management.
This
problem
 will sustainable development from efficacy administration from the government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Sustainable packaging
  • Environmental pollution
  • Overflowing landfills
  • Recycling efforts
  • Waste segregation
  • Composting
  • Biodegradable
  • Waste-to-energy
  • Public awareness
  • Single-use plastics
  • Renewable resources
  • Toxic emissions
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Resource conservation
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