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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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These days it is common for families where both the
parents
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 work. Few
parents
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 believe that other members of the family
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 as
grandparents
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 can look after their
children
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 while at work, while there are other couples who think
childcare
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centers
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 look after their kids much better. I will be discussing both the views in
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 topic, but I believe that
grandparents
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 can play a better role than
childcare
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centers
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. While critics argue that
grandparents
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 should be freed of their burden due to their old
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 and taking
care
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 of their grandchildren is an added burden looking at their
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.
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, I would suggest that
children
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 who are raised in joint families and taken
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 by their
grandparents
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 from an early
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 tend to have more morals, affection and family values within them when compared with
children
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 who grew in a
childcare
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 center .
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: - A
child
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 who was raised with their
grandparents
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 always finds it easy to discuss his emotions and feels secured that he has someone beside him to protect him in any matter whenever he is in trouble.
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,
this
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 enhances a
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child’s
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 confidence within him to deal with the world in his growing years.
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, I would like to add that
grandparents
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 who are retired and alone in their old life enjoy to have a companion in the form of a
child
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, who could keep them busy and let’s them avoid the depression of being alone.
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:- A survey from the NY times has estimated that an increase in old
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 homes is because people at old
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 tend to get depressed of being alone.
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, its always better to let grand
parents
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 stay with the family. It has been observed that many
parents
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 believe that
childcare
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care
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centers
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 are the ultimate option while they are at work due to many factors.
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,
childcare
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centers
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 get involved in the overall development of the
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child’s
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 brain activity, performance by involving them in various brain development games etc. which let’s the
child
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 excel in his academic career.
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:- A friend of mine who enrolled his
children
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 in a
child
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care
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 at a early
age
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, has seen a drastic difference with his kids overall activity which is mostly innovative.
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,
childcare
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centers
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 are a place of communication for
children
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 to meet with other
children
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 of their
age
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 which ultimately breaks the barrier of being an introvert.
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: - A study suggested that
children
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 who grow up in an open environment tend to socialize and gel with their peers better than the ones who grow in a closed family environment. To conclude, the above essay has discussed both scenarios of working
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 who believe that their
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child’s
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care
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 can be done by other members of the family
such
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 as their
grandparents
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, while there are
parents
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 who
also
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 believe that
this
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 can be done by a
childcare
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 center.
However
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, in my opinion I believe that
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child’s
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 development and
care
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 is much better handled by our experienced
grandparents
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.
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