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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people? Why might this be the case? Is it a positive or negative situation?

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In many nations,
people
 think that it is important to own a
house
instead
 of living in a rented one.
This
 is because
people
 do not like the interference of
house
 owners and I think that it is a positive situation because
people
 can decorate their
houses
 according to their taste. The main reason why
people
 prefer to buy a
house
 is that many
house
 owners interfere with how
people
 live their life. A common conflict seen in most cases is a restriction of timings to go out and come back
home
. Due to
this
, arguments can break out between them, and
therefore
,
people
 tend to change
houses
 again and again.
For example
, a recent survey conducted by Times Now revealed that nearly 40% of
people
 want to have their own
home
 because the interference of homeowners frustrate them. I believe
this
 is a positive development because
this
 enables
people
 to make
changes
 in their
home
 according to their will. There is no restriction to do what they want.
People
 feel a sense of freedom to live their life and decorate their
houses
.
For example
, when I was living in a rented
house
, I was not allowed to make
changes
 in my rented apartment. I recently purchased a
house
 and I decorated it according to my taste and I do not have to worry about anyone
to make
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 any
changes
 in my
home
. In conclusion, many individuals are buying their own
houses
 because they do not like the interference of
house
 owners, and owning a
house
 gives them the freedom to make any
changes
 they like.
Submitted by Aditya Patel on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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