to do some voluntery work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the volunteer work in your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Mr. Andersen. My name is Tomás Alcaide, and I am writing to you regarding the recent announcement that I saw yesterday on the Nature and History Museum website, in which it was claimed that you are seeking volunteers to work at your facilities.

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, I have to mention that I would be pleased to do

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voluntary work.

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is because I find nothing more valuable than teaching others about the history and nature of our beloved nation. Since I am already a science teacher at an elementary school in the zone, I am sure my previous experience will help me to give a great experience to every visitor, especially

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for the little ones who might think that a museum is not as fun as going to the playground at the park.

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, I assure you I can show them the opposite.

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, I would be available on Saturdays from 2 pm until 6 pm and on Sundays from 9 am until 1 pm. Looking forward to having an interview with you to discuss

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my application for the job. Yours faithfully. Tomás Alcaide.

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Jul 28, 2025

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Add more details about your passion for history and nature to strengthen your interest in volunteering.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on one main idea while connecting them smoothly.

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Check the closing sentence for correct phrasing to leave a polished impression.

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The letter has a polite tone and maintains respect towards the director.

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The writer clearly states availability for volunteering, which is important.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

186 words

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