Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In the modern
world
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,world
people
have many problems with their health. One such
issue is excess weight. There are a lot of reasons of
that unhealthy problem. According to experts, the most common causes are sedentary Change preposition
for
lifestyle
and unhealthy food. Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
However
, some people
believe that obesity as a diagnosis is higher in wealthy countries. In that case, in this
essay
I will try to give my thoughts to resolve the issue.
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Firstly
, I strongly disagree with people
who suppose that welfare is a reason of
obesity. Change preposition
for
For example
, Switzerland is one of the richest countries in Europe, but the body mass index among citizens is optimal. If we compare this
country with the USA, we might notice a highly developed junk food industry in America. In that case, I would say that the easiest way to avoid being overweight is to follow a simple ration which
includes veggies, clean water, cereal and vitamins.
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that
Secondly
, as I have mentioned earlier, there is a sedentary lifestyle. This
way of life literally kills our health. We spend a lot of time sitting in front of the computer while working, then
we seat in a bus or a car on the way home. Moreover
, we are used to spending free time watching a TV series or playing a video game. Obviously, these actions can not affect people
's health from a positive side. So, I would recommend to everyone who leads such
a lifestyle be more physically active. There are many ways to make you healthier. For instance
, running in the morning is extremely
useful exercise. Add an article
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Moreover
, there are gyms and fitness centers
for busy Change the spelling
centres
people
.
In conclusion, in my mind to solve the obesity issue people
should have self control
, do physical activity and eat healthy natural food.Add a hyphen
self-control
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